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Summer time and the living is easy?

June 27, 2017
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Title Summer time and the living is easy?
Author WhySoRuff
Upvotes 0
Comments 11
Date June 27, 2017 12:56 AM UTC (5 years ago)
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[–]aigamithite8 points9 points  (2 children) | Copy Link

Bratan I urge you to delete this post, before a mod takes off your point.

[–]WhySoRuff1 point2 points  (1 child) | Copy Link

Bratuxa what I would prefer is for people to tell me what about my writing is not good enough to up vote? Genuinely... I want to know.

Does my humor water down my message?

Is it my writing style?

Because I am absolutely sure of the idea that I present in this post. I have important things to say and I need to make my writing good enough to present those ideas. I urge everyone to plug in their two cents but since you knew I would understand what Bratan means I EXPECT you to critique my piece.

No hard feelings to anyone that trashes me, I'm asking for it.

[–]aigamithite5 points6 points  (0 children) | Copy Link

It's rather hard to get the message of the post. My interpretation is that it's a warning of things to come pertaining to social justice and how media twist and turn stories around, in addition to race issues in contemporary America. Of course I could be wrong.

Another thing is that given the recent climate in TRP it would be wise to refrain from adding politics to the mix (with your Trump statement). It might make people angry.

If you polish your post a bit and make it more clear and reframed in a red pill context, it could definitely be better. You already have a point so the things you say are of above average value; keep yourself up to that standard.

[–]Slatcarf3 points4 points  (3 children) | Copy Link

You basically said:

P1: There are two obscene news stories that may be connected.

P2: I idolize Charlamagne, and he says racial-political things and has also become what I think since I don't listen to anyone else or have my own opinions.

P3: Quote by 50 relating to the summer time.

P4: I looked up the basis of 50s quote and saying that the powers that manipulate the masses are even more fearful since Trump is President.

P5: Main point is when people fight over race (or anything), profit is made from the violence.

P6: An event, a fight (surprisingly), is occurring between two people in the media stream that I follow/subscribe to. It happens to be a white male vs a black male.

Analysis: It seems your writing style or lack of, is to point out events and your thoughts on those events as well as the sequence of events transpiring around you. Your universe is simply the things you think about, so all you see is what the media is filling your brain. Your're trying to notice a pattern of the things you notice and make a point about it. The good thing is you are questioning the pattern and the events around you.

Only paragraph 5 had anything substantial to make a post about and even then it would not have any evidence, thus making it a conspiracy.

To improve your writing, try organizing and grouping like ideas together. For each paragraph try to make one point. For all the points to link together in a logical sequence is what you aim for to arrive at your conclusion.

For instance a writing style more people will accept and follow can be something like this:

Health by Slatcarf

P1: There are fruits in the world

P2: Oranges contain vitamin C. Bananas contain potassium.

P3: We need Vitamin C and Potassium for health.

P4: Being healthy is what we want

Conclusion: We should all eat fruits.

TL;DR OP's post has nothing to do with TRP whatsoever

[–]WhySoRuff0 points1 point  (1 child) | Copy Link

Thank you for pointing out my mistakes. However, I must correct some of your conclusions (I suppose this reflects more on my writing and not as much on your conclusions). Charlamagne is a prime example of having rock solid frame, that is it. He has also become the premier political and cultural voice for Liberal/Black America which is one in the same at this point (if your paying attention). However he is spewing such blatant propaganda and me being a fan of rap and enjoying his interviewing gives me a special look inside how the masses are manipulated (rap music is UNIVERSAL).

I looked up the basis of 50s quote and saying that the powers that manipulate the masses are even more fearful since Trump is President.

No sir, the powers that manipulate the masses are having an easier time manipulating the masses because Trump is in office.

All I wanted to do with this post was warn folks that this summer is going to be very......eventful and to be careful.

Thanks for the attempt at discrediting my post as non-TRP where we show men reality.

[–]Slatcarf0 points1 point  (0 children) | Copy Link

I looked up the basis of 50s quote and saying that the powers that manipulate the masses are even more fearful since Trump is President. No sir, the powers that manipulate the masses are having an easier time manipulating the masses because Trump is in office

Yes by making the masses scared and in fear, it IS Easier. We are agreeing on the same point.

I am discrediting your post because it has nothing to do with sexual strategy.

[–]The-Hardball-Player1 point2 points  (2 children) | Copy Link

I want what you're smoking but not before I'm about to write something

[–]WhySoRuff1 point2 points  (1 child) | Copy Link

HAHAHAHAHA SO BRAVE!!!!!!!

You play t-ball sir, not hardball.

[–]The-Hardball-Player0 points1 point  (0 children) | Copy Link

College baseball player but okay my dude.

You seem flustered. Would you like a critique on your writing so it will stop getting shit on?

[–]josh_gropin0 points1 point  (1 child) | Copy Link

i recommend this

[–]WhySoRuff-1 points0 points  (0 children) | Copy Link

I'm in the middle of a book but that has been placed in my reading queue. Would you mind tearing my piece apart? Or telling me what you gathered from my piece?

You can kill a man, but you can't kill an idea.

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