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| 3 | Please criticize the beginning of this chapter in my book.Grammatical errors aside, the Nietzsche tangent needs to come full circle to your dominatrix experience in some way. Theres a build up of tension there that you can capitalise on which left more to be desired with no tension relief at the end. Enjoyed it though. | /r/TheRedPill | 11/01/22 01:01 PM |
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