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| 4 | The Female Brain - a manipulation machineHey since you're open to criticism on this, PM me your writing and I'll proofread it for you and fix major errors. I think you're a very good writer, but you have some persistent errors. "You're" means "you are". "You're a very good writer" is always identical to "You are a very good writer" "Your writing is very good" CANNOT be written as "You are writing is very good" To ensure that you're using your/you're correctly, substitute "you are", and see if it still makes sense. ThEn is about timE. F… | /r/TheRedPill | 28/09/16 08:47 AM |
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