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Are you watching closely?

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Title Are you watching closely?
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Upvotes 1
Comments 11
Date June 22, 2015 2:27 PM UTC
(11 years ago)
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[–]The_BeardedGentleman 4 points5 points6 points 11 years ago (2 children) | Copy Link

No comment on the actual substance of your post just yet, this is towards your writing style.

Try to avoid using the following:

and bear with me for a moment,

But my basic point is

Okay, I am getting to the point now.

But let me offer you my point of view here

These type of sentences serve no purpose other than being fluff. You don't say "Let me say something" every time you speak. It comes off as extremely annoying.

Telling me to bear with you, only makes me think "oh god now I have to bear through this". Without saying it at all, the thought never would have occurred.

Telling me that you're getting to the point is a waste of time. Just get to the god damn point lol. Don't tell me what point of view you're about to offer, just offer it.

[–]SwarupMondal1 point2 points3 points 11 years ago (1 child) | Copy Link

I have never written a thing on internet before. So, I beg your pardon and thanks for being so considerate.

[–]The_BeardedGentleman 2 points3 points4 points 11 years ago (0 children) | Copy Link

I used to write those little fillers all the time until a teacher gave me a zero on something I spent a ton of time on haha.

[–]CisWhiteMaelstrom 2 points3 points4 points 11 years ago (4 children) | Copy Link

I've been browsing askmen lately. I see some seriously goofy bullshit over there. Not sure if it's still on the front page but there was a post "Hey guys, can we talk a out what makes you feel sad and lonely?" Let's be real for a second. That's a lame fucking thread and there's no way that a thread so lame gets upvoted naturally. Someone's been injectung estrogen up the butt.

The real agenda there is for all the mangina white knights to prove to themselves and the women of askmen that they can do what women do in womanly ways and act like total unmasculine bitches. They sit around being awkward sharing their feelings and God knows that they're aware on some level how full of shit they are. When men abandon their gender roles, it's awkward.

[–]SwarupMondal0 points1 point2 points 11 years ago (3 children) | Copy Link

And moreover dating advice these are full of "How you should let women see your weak side", which tbh does nothing but exactly the opposite of what we want.

[–]CisWhiteMaelstrom 1 point2 points3 points 11 years ago (0 children) | Copy Link

Women are absolutely disgusted by their sexuality. The reason that it's so difficult for men to figure out is because it's fundamentally idiotic. All reason says one thing but their sexuality is another. Women go into denial about how fucked up their nature is and they're so deeply committed to the lie they tell themselves that they'd rather ruin a man's dating life than face the mirror. White knights are men who hate women's sexuality too, enough that they'd rather to into celibate denial then face reality.

[–]NeoreactionSafe2 points3 points4 points 11 years ago (4 children) | Copy Link

Todays post by Rollo Tomassi is much deeper than this.

There was a real history with the Free Love Era that got us here.

I'd suggest everyone read Rollo's post and the actual article. It's really one of the best (most accurate) analysis of why things are the way things exist today.

[–]SwarupMondal0 points1 point2 points 11 years ago (1 child) | Copy Link

Sir, Rollo Tomassi is a professional writer, someone who expertise in the thing which this community is about. As I have mentioned at the end of the post that I just wanted to share my thoughts. And also I had never written a thing on internet before, this was my first. So thanks for being considerate and reading my post. I am open to criticism. :)

[–]NeoreactionSafe1 point2 points3 points 11 years ago (0 children) | Copy Link

You had the misfortune of posting on a day when one of our superstars posted one of his. It's hard to shine in these conditions. Your post was fine... no problem.

[–]SwarupMondal0 points1 point2 points 11 years ago (1 child) | Copy Link

Also, could you provide a link? :)

[–]NeoreactionSafe1 point2 points3 points 11 years ago (0 children) | Copy Link

http://therationalmale.com/2015/06/22/adaptations-part-ii/

Plus the comment area here on Red Pill which is:

Adaptations II

(linking is illegal)

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