“Hey congrats on the job” “I always thought you were mad cute in hs lol I’d love to network over coffee or w/e people on LinkedIn do”

This is to girl from high school I only talked to like once in the grade above me like 4 years ago. My LinkedIn profile has good social proof imo because of my job. I think I’m saying too many words in the message let me know what you guys think if it’s beta or not