Got a cute waitresses number, this is my first time applying TRP after getting digits so I'm looking for feedback and criticisms.

I've been in this restaurant a few times and had noticed her before, she was giving IOIs, asking if there was anything else she could do for me, saying "I don't bite" playfully, I respond with "what if I ask you to?" She was obviously caught off guard and simply said she doesn't bite again. I give a playful laugh and a smirk pay my bill and leave. (Probably should have made a move at this point but was with coworkers and had to go)

The next time I go in I ask another waitress if she's working, she isn't but I find out her name. I go back the next day and she's working again, I make sure to use eye contact and I can see her looking at me, giggling with a co-worker, clearly interested. Catch her looking at me again so i give her a playful smirk and a wink, she blushes, looks away and tries to play it off. I finish eating she comes around so I ask her if it's too early for a compliment, she gives a little laugh and says sure she gets compliments all the time. I wait a few seconds and playfully say "well, I'm waiting". She looks puzzled a bit laughs, smiles and says it went right over her head, then says you've got a handsome smile. She asks if there's anything else she can get me so I say yeah your phone number, she starts to walk away seeming a bit dazed so I say "is that a no". She says "give me a minute" and then write her number on (the wrong) check and asks me to erase it after I save it in my phone.

I text her later the next day, saying "hey it's the guy with the handsome smile from the (resteraunt)" She replies this morning with Oh hey! I was sleeping when you texted me. I respond after several hours with " hey ____ , my name is ____ btw, hope my text didn't wake you She replies with "no it's ok, I don't remember giving you my name though?? Or did you just hear it in the restaurant? (I'm worried at this point I've come across as a bit creepy so I go with a confident direct approach) I reply "yeah I picked it up at your work when I decided I was going to ask for your number wink emoji) She just says "oh okay lol" I decided to stick with direct and confident and after a decent amount of time had passed I text that I'm out of town for a few weeks, ask about her schedule and that I'll text her before I get back into town if she isn't busy we can hang out.

I'm leaving it at that waiting to see if she's going to respond or not. I know I made a few slip ups, using her name and offering to hang out on her schedule. Aside from that I'm hoping she has enough interest that I can recover.

Would appreciate pointers on what I'm doing right what I'm fucking up especially things I haven't picked up on already and any advice going forward.