Figure out what your target audience would want. It's hard to create something that everybody likes. Do research in what kind of pictures work and what your target audience want.
If you go on dating sites and read 1000 of women's texts it's pretty clear what they want. They get to be picky because they are in the front seat and the really describe What They want. Figure it out and think how your text can convey that person. Don't put it in bullet points but in your text so the general feeling is that you are that person.
Ex: if you want to convey that you are funny have one picture that show how you do something whacky.. or be funny in part of your text.
Women in general want guys who can make them laugh. They are worried a lot and laughter means a lot to them.
Women in general also wants smart men because your brain is the success key in this world. Show it..
Lying about stuff isn't good because it will shine through in the end. Try to see those attributes in you and if you don't have them then maybe try to get them for your own sake.
Dress proper, groom and take good pictures. You get a couple of seconds of exposure to each woman. Don't have bad pictures. Think about the cost of going to a professional hairdresser, stylist and photographer in the relation to the advantage you will get in the massive amount of competition. If you can't afford it then there is a lot you can do on your own or with the help of friends.
If you see your profile as an AD amongst so many other similar ones for the same product you have to put an effort. You got to vibrate, popunder or do the things you can to stand out. Think like an advertisement person.
I hate how this world has become with the online dating scene but you could avoid or own it.
ADieu
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