Give me some feedback on this engaging scope I just came up with. It is only suitable for when a good rapour has been built already, but I reckon it could drop some pant's. Female feed back would be appreciated. Try it out if you think it's worthy.

''So you're fair game?'', ''yeah'', ''well, I've got my eyes on you.'' ''If you're not carefull and get too close, put yourself in the right position and/or stay still long enough. You'll be mine''.

How does that sound to you? Now I've typed it out, I'm sure it's been used before somewhere.