This is a girl who I've been trying to get a chance to talk to but never could. I'm in high school and only see her at lunch I didn't really want to just show up at her table and just start chatting her up. So I decided to message her on fb. And one of her best friends is one of my friends we'll call her "Sam"

Me:heyy

Her:hi there

Me:you're Sam's friend aren't you?

Her:yep!

Me:oh cool, i always see you with her.

Her:yep, we're basically glued to the hip lol

Me:lol she's really cool. Are you as cool as her?

Her:Ha thats my life goal:P

Me:you seem to be achieving it(:

Her:why thank you sir(:

Me:yeah, yeah, don't get used to it(: haha

Her:lol ill try not to:P

Me:Ha, we should talk in person sometime.

Her:alrighty but imma warn you, im awkward as hell!

Me:that's okay. Most cute girls are, but i gotta go so ill ttyl.

Her:;P alrighty byee

Any thing i should work on? I thought I was pretty direct in my intentions of not being just another pal. But any constructive criticism is helpful.