Good evening gentlemen

So I made plans to go to a park with a HB8, and she was all into it, I told her that we would go on friday, and she said it sounds great.

After that day came along, I text her and ask her to meet me up by my house so we can go, she says no, and says to meet up at a restaurant, and I told her it would be easier just to go to my house, but then I realized it would work out fine if we went to a restaurant first. I end up meeting her up there, and she seemed to be really excited to see me, when I saw her I realized her friend (another girl HB4) was driving, and she left her friends car and ran up to me and gave me a long hug, and she said she was really happy to see me again (after a long time of not hanging out haha).

Then while walking inside she keeps on making up weird nicknames for me (other ways of saying my name "victor" in different language). After me having a short conversation with her and her friend, I decide to go to the bathroom, so I tap her and say, alright, you go order food, I'll be back in a bit. After a while we sat down, and she kept on saying about how she hates this one girl that her ex cheated on, and I moved the conversation out to a little bit more positive, and I did a little bit of more kino afterwards, and she was touching her hair like constantly..

Afterwards, she said another one of her friends is coming along, it turned out to be a older guy, and once he came over, he pretty much kept on talking and talking, without stopping, and not letting anyone interrupt him. Afterwards we decided to go somewhere else, some small park. After getting there it was really weird, we all were sitting on a dock, and talking about the lake etc, I tried to put in some more interesting conversations, but then again she and her friend started talking about the girl's ex, and what he was like, etc. It just seemed like they wouldnt stop. Then we left.

as we were walkign on a path, around, she told me victor, you would take the longest path with the biggest hill, and afterwards, I wanted to go walk longer but the rest of them (the girl, her friend, and the other guy) are pretty lazy, they didn't want to walk anymore, so we walked back to our cars and we were just talking on the parking lot and she bums me a cigarette without me really asking, I then proceed to telling a few stories which made her laugh a lot and she told me my stories are always fun.

I decided it was time to leave though since it was getting dark, and I knew i wasn't going to get much accomplished since her guy friend just kept on talking like he's on coke, he seems like an alright guy and alright to have a conversation with but he just wont shut up haha. So yeah. Also she texted me an hour later after I left "it was great seeing you again :)" and I just wrote back that we are going to hang out soon, and she said fosho.

Anything I can do to improve? I am somewhat new to seddit, so any feedback would be great!

Thanks for reading my huuuuuuge wall of text.