Resume Advice

balalasaurus · 2015-03-25T13:49:40+00:00

Are your accomplishments your own or your teams? Stop saying 'as a team' and instead say 'lead a team'. Equally stop with 'our department' and say 'my department'. Text is a difficult medium to convey dominance which is why you have to be that much more dominant.

alpha_n3rd · 2015-03-25T14:53:58+00:00

What sort of job are you looking for?

Your summary section is blank.

What the hell is a "Make ready"? I can't tell from your resume what the hell you did at that job at all.

Where you say

"Skills: Proficient computer skills"

That sounds redundant. List your computer skills explicitly.

Microsoft Windows
Microsoft Word
Microsoft Excel
Mac OS X
Troubleshooting
Configuration

Reformat it to fit on one page; your resume doesn't warrant two.

Title	Resume Advice
Author	GG_oatnut
Upvotes	0
Comments	6
Date	March 25, 2015 1:29 AM UTC (11 years ago)
Subreddit	Posted in /r/TRPOffTopic
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