Email Sarah Kliff ([email protected])

Dear Ms. Kliff,

In your recent article "9 facts about violence against women everyone should know", located at http://www.vox.com/2014/5/25/5748610/eight-facts-about-violence-against-women-everyone-should-know

You wrote: "6. One in ten women has a head or spinal cord injury as a result of physical assault"

However, looking at the data, this statement isn't worded properly. The better way to say this is that "One in ten female victims of physical assault had a resulting head or spinal cord injury".

In matters of discussing assault, proper wording is always crucial, as it is a sensitive issue.

Sincerely,

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