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[–]working-girl-FDS Newbie28 points29 points30 points 6 years ago (1 child) | Copy Link
Also why does he keep texting the word busy to you ?
[–]juliannawackenhatFDS Newbie10 points11 points12 points 6 years ago (0 children) | Copy Link
This is why OLD doesn’t work for me. Who texts like that? Is English his first language? As soon as I realize someone is stupid, I just can’t.
[–]raindampenedFDS Apprentice8 points9 points10 points 6 years ago (2 children) | Copy Link
I don't understand he wrote that sentence right. "your eyes are so intoxicating". he didn't write "you're". I think you might misread that. the main grammar mistake he wrote was "take" instead of "thank".
but yeah this "intoxicating" thing is off. he thinks being compared to alcohol/drugs is sexy bc people romanticized toxic relationships. yikes.
[–]JCPCat1956FDS Newbie[S] 1 point2 points3 points 6 years ago (1 child) | Copy Link
True, my phone autocorrected your into "you're".
For context, we're Indian. And so many songs and poems refer to eyes as intoxicating. "Nasheeli aakhein" would be the phrase in Hindi.
His writing seems to be a direct translation of his mother tongue which is okay in my book.
My main problem was the opening line and I was bothered less by the grammar. Why not talk like a normal person instead of flattery. That screamed fuckboi and I was put off.
[–]Suicide_Muffin5 points6 points7 points 6 years ago (0 children) | Copy Link
"You're Eyes" lol
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