Hey guys, I've been reading PUA material and the sidebar for the past few years (longer even but didn't really put it to use so I'm almost starting from scratch).

I went out to the hot spot in my city where all the bars and cafes are to cold approach during the day. There was only one girl that met my criteria (7.5 - 8+), didn't get a number but here goes (btw maybe this belongs in the official redpill subreddit but technically it is a question so here goes:

Saw a girl with a great ass walking ahead of me. Im wearing a striped shirt and she was too. Was like “excuse me but there can only be one attractive person with a striped shirt on this side of the street, Im gonna need you to go over there (was at first thinking of complimenting her shirt but decided fuck that, I'm gonna be a bit of a dick). She laughs, I say Im Thrownawayisland and shake her hand. She says it's a beautiful day and I say "well yeah now that Ive entered the picture". She laughs.

I say “normally I’d just toss you over there [across the street] but theres a small chance you'd land on the road. Im willing to take that chance though". She says thats not very nice (so far so good, no nice guy shit here). Im like “you're pretty chill”. She says “you're chill too, since you didn't throw me on the road”.

We keep walking next ot each other, I let a bit of silence go, then say "beautiful day for shopping (trying to figure out why she's thee, maybe I should have just said whatcha up to) and shes like “I’m actually on my way to work”. Im like “not me, I get to chill with some pups later, sucks to be you”. (is this even push/pull?). She laughed and says "thanks". I’m like "so you got a tough job or one if those easy ones where you put makeup on people all day". She laughs and says she works at [insert restaurant]. I say "in that case I'll take a coupon book".

I can see the restaurant coming up so decide to go in for the close now that there's been some kino (the handshake), some rapport building with jokes, plus push/pull (being the "authority" on striped shirts). Then I’m like "look why don't we grab a drink later". She says "I kinda have a bf". I say "I kinda have a gf" (saw RSD Julien do something like this and the chicks seemed to love it, plus I went from fat to fit losing over 80 lbs in the past 2 years so I'm lookin good). She smiles and says "I'm not really into that". We get in front of the restaurant at this point and I shake her hand and say "was cool talkin to ya" and go on without missing a beat.

She seemed into me, laughing and talking, whereas in the past some girls would just ignore me and keep walking. Any idea how I could have improved this? Thanks!