Met this girl on the bus and got her number, face to face talking went well enough, I'm not sure what's wrong with my texting , but no reply at the end. Take a look at our exchange:

{Right after she gets off the bus} 13:59 - Her: What is your name? 😂

14:09 - Me: [My Name]

14:09 - Me: Yours?

14:10 - Her: [Her Name]

15:48 - Me: Going to have dinner somewhere on [Street] tonight, coming?

15:53: - Her: No ma'am.

{The next day}

07:20 - Me: That's sir to you

07:21 - Me: I feel like pizza, meet me at [Pizza Place] at 7

{I then butt dial her}

Any tips and criticism welcome, I am here to learn.

(I kept it short and logistics focussed; coudn't help it with "that's sir to you; perhaps I have been to harsh?)