Here's my first field report

Today, I was at a restaurant and I saw a cute girl. I said to myself when she's going to take your command, go for it, try. It was my first time trying with a girl that I don't know. So she said what do you want ? I said to her : Oh I want a poutine with love inside please. She laughed and right after she gaved me my poutine I said : Can I have an extra please, I'd like to have your cellphone number so I can text you later. She laughed again and gave me her number.

Can you guys give me feedback and sorry for my english, i'm a french canadian !