I noticed that obviously saying things that are "different" are generally better.

ie- avoiding "hey" "whats up" or "lets chill" "wyd?" ""wanna hang out"

My friend has the line of "wanna go on a date?" cause it disarms women and makes them think he's really interested while also seeming "gentleman like" he then usually takes them to the park or something free after telling them its a "surprise" and tries his best to pick them up and go home with them.

What's a good essentially copy paste way in which i can appear different (most guys say hey or hello, etc) all while cutting to the point quickly to see the chick that day or not (to not waste my time, i'm looking to hook up not date at the moment) while not giving away that i wanna hook up or hang at their place.

Is my friends idea good? He usually says it on a first message on tinder or dating sites so he "stands out" from most guys saying "Hey" but i don't know what to do if the chick bullshits around after that or says shes not free that night and i also know it's not good to get any "no's" from a chick cause i heard in one PUA artists video that the more no's you get from a chick in person or in text, the more likely you're to get more?

So conversation example

me- wanna go on a date?

her- lol when? (or where, so she might ask where, or say she can't tonight)

me- tonight (or ask her if she's free tonight? which is best?) (or none of those? i'm trying to avoid small talk at all costs or get a date/ fuck basically or next)

her- i can't i'm busy (or she says how we should talk more?)

me-oh ok one time offer, peace.

So that's how my usual conversations go, or could go (or do you think that's how i should do it with the most effective chance? please provide answers to those questions or good responses with the highest chance of getting her out.

Don't say sidebar or give me BS answers cause you're too lazy to read what i wrote or write the responses to all those responses i wrote out. thank you guys or those who do help.