Hey guys,

I am sending messages to some girls on match and a buddy of mine has been critiquing a couple of them. We are in disagreement about the email shown below.

First, here is her about me section "Hi! Spending time outside on a nice day is simply awesome. I have had opportunities to live in different countries and cities that allowed me to meet people from all walks of life and become more of an open minded person. I enjoy comedy. . I am fairly new to ***** - it would be great to meet someone who is like minded. I find meeting in person is a much better way to get to know someone. Cheers!"

Here is her profile headline: "Rise up this mornin.Smiled with the risin' sun.."

Now here is my message to her:

Email Headline: Three little birds pitch by my door step.....

Emails: Singing sweet songs of melodies pure and true saying, this is my message to you:

Hey, looks like we have both had opportunities to live in different countries and cities to meet numerous people of all likes--crazy, nuts, awesome, funny .... where do you fit in there...hopefully the latter

I am also new to **** and looking for like minded individuals--this makes it quite difficult because of my enigmatic qualities....however, you may fit the bill

I also much prefer to meet in person than peck away behind a screen. Let's do a drink this week. You free Tuesday or Wednesday?

-Scott