I met a girl 2 days ago (Thursday) and, like always, it didn't work out. I am posting this because this sort of thing happens to me with every god damn woman I try to get with. In fact, this particular girl was the most receptive I've met in years and so I am further at lost. I am convinced something about my approach is fundamentally wrong.

Met girl (we'll call her A) at local bar. We talked and flirted a bit. A fair amount of kino. No kissing or anything beyond that. That bar closes and I invite her to go to another bar close by that is open till later. She agrees and her, I and a couple of friends go. During the short car ride she gets a call from a guy who we can all hear is upset and she asks me to tell her the name of the bar and tells him. We arrive at the bar and soon after the guy shows up and she abruptly leaves. As she leaves she invites me to hang out the next day (Friday), but I reject the offer since I was busy. She texts me about a half an hour after she is driven away by the dude a simple "Hey" which I ignore since I didn't end up seeing it until much later in the night. I don't text her back the next day (Friday) either cause I was pretty busy like I said and I didn't really want to have the distraction. Today (Saturday) I text her and our conversation goes:

Me: You missed out, A. (The second bar's name) was poppin after you dipped/got abducted.

Her: Lmfao

Me: I'm going to (place) tonight. You can come with if the kidnappings are over.

She doesn't respond from that point. I don't understand what I did wrong, but most of my interactions with girls are similar to this with me being bold and cutting to chase from the get go and them just stopping to respond. I knew the one word "lmfao" response was bad so I figured I'd just try to polarize her by asking her out right then and avoiding a string of boring and unproductive texts. This situation was unique as she was way more receptive overall in person than most girls I meet. She had a few drinks in her though so it may have just been that. I'm thinking, if she ends up not responding at all, saying tomorrow "Guess you don't want to be friends. Was nice meeting you" or something to that effect.

In the end, I have no fucking idea what I'm doing wrong and basically every interaction goes like this or worse. I really need some constructive feedback.