Background: got number of cute girl during day (gym) approach but didn't build enough attraction. She answers a few texts but then ignores once I try to set up date later.

A few weeks later I try again, tell her I'm going on cool trip and will write when I get back. She responds w/ something friendly. When I get back, I try out beast neg that I thought of-- "back now" "don't remember what you look like though. send me your facebook so i can see if i still wanna take you on a date"

Which gets me this response: "Hahahaa I don't remember yours too. Thought we were going to be friends. What makes you think I'd go out with someone who talks to a girl like that. Lol tc."

My response: "have enough friends. send it and just maybe you’ll get a friend request back"

Not bad but not sure if that's the best I could have done. Thoughts?

I also used this same text on another day approach (who was easier/more receptive/nicer) and it still worked fine. To any doubters of the neg: it definitely seems to work. I have only just started out with negging but it seems great so far.

Thanks for the help guys.