This is the text that i send to a girl:

Hi NameOfGirl,

i was near the NameOfMall (shopping mall, where she works) and thought i visit you for a quick chat. To bad you weren't there. I wanted to ask you if you would like to go to the movies with me. Well now i will likely never know what you would have answered. Anyways congratulation on your promotion, i hope you celebrated it.

Bye Schatten.

The she answered:

Thank you, i knocked off work at 5'o clock today. I am very busy at the moment. Sorry.

Analysis please! Sorry for my bad English i translated all of the texts.