Writing about femininity

1987dd1987 · 2021-03-13T15:18:00+00:00

I think it’s a good reflection of what it feels like to be “swimming against the tide” in today’s society.

I especially like how you focused on the distinction between professional and personal life. I think many people imagine that red pill is about going back to the 50s with women only as homemakers/doormats whereas that is not the truth and is one of the biggest myths/barriers to people adopting this lifestyle.

The English teacher in me struggled with your use of the word “gonna” and “wanna”

I really appreciate how you took such a huge philosophy and boiled it down to its central components in a really easy to understand way. It’s very accessible in that there isn’t a bunch of jargon or complexity.

The only suggestion I would have is a part at the end directing women to outside resources where they can find out more (Laura Doyle’s book, Suzanne venker’s podcast, this Reddit, etc)

anna27000 · 2021-03-13T23:13:55+00:00

I think your ideas are clear, except when you say "because simply.. it just does not work". Maybe expand a little on why or how it does not work. Overall, I really like how straight-forward and to-the-point you are with your ideas.

JunkDrawerExistence · 2021-03-14T07:45:02+00:00

Oh..the "wanna" at the end made me cringe. I appreciate seeing this perspective without a religious component

yourbadformylungs · 2021-03-17T21:31:16+00:00

My only critique is that I do believe men should feel some amount of empathy, more than expressed in the article. Not as much as his female counterpart although if a man lacks empathy and doesn’t have that guidance that s a huge red flag.

Title	Writing about femininity
Author	katerina2121
Upvotes	23
Comments	8
Date	March 13, 2021 3:06 PM UTC (5 years ago)
Subreddit	Posted in /r/RedPillWomen
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