Gaming this girl at uni. She had an idea to have an end of semester bonfire and I dug the idea and used my social network to organize and make it happen this Saturday. It's been mostly friendly between us but there's an attraction underneath it and she's been giving IOIs after breaking up with a dude a few weeks ago. Want to set up the frame for the night with some NLP texts and wanted feedback in case anyone has some experience with them.

What I have so far: "Hey ****, great call on the bonfire! People really want to come"

follow up text, "I like to be ontop of things so I'm going to be at the site early to get a pit if you want to hook up at the beach and get the fire going with me"

Curious to get feedback on if its too much or anything else if anyone has any tips.