Yeah it's a work in progress and I'm not happy with it now so any useful suggestions are welcome.

Here it is:

"So you decided to actually read my profile, good for you! You're a winner in my book already. The world is full of people who make snap judgements based on how things look on the surface but you're not one of them or, if you are one of those people, you're at least making an attempt to change so for that I salute you. First let me say that I have zero tolerance for BS so don't lead me on if you aren't serious about building something amazing with me. Life is such a great gift that I don't want to waste any of my time on dealing with people who have big egos or people who are afraid to be honest.

Yeah that may come off a bit serious but it's only because I don't like people wasting my time. Honestly I'm pretty laid back. I enjoy working out, playing sports, being outdoors, and a lot of other things that I won't go into so I don't bore you to tears."