I tend to have bad and good approaches. In those good ones getting a girl's phone number looks easy.

1) For example this monday I talked to a girl, who was with her female friend. At the moment I opened her they were in different places, but after few minutes they were together again, but I managed to isolate the girl I opened before and I closed the deal. I said "You look fucking great, have an amazing smile, I'd like to hang out with you maybe next week" and she only asks "You want my facebook or phone number?"..

2) Some time ago I was talking to another student. We were laughing, she was telling she's on her way on something, but I was keeping her and having a good talk. Again, once I asked for a number, there weren't any excuses, she just put it in my phone..

Both girls stopped replying to me after like two days after my approach. I'm afraid I'm still too needy over text. I mean, I was following Torero's text model (yea, my fav pua lol), trying to not write too much and too frequent. Once I started to feel she's giving some, I was also giving a bit more. I'm not sure, what should I change, so I'm just going to translate you my conversations with both girls, so you fellas could kindly help me? ;)

[convo with girl from 1), texted ~5 hours after approach]
19:50 - me: Hi, mrs. confectioner, it's me, that guy from the clinic. Right now, when I'm writing, I'm eating ice cream and soon my stomach will blow from sugar haha
21:29 - her: Welcome Sir, too much it's unhealthy, anonymous...
22:22 - me: Yes.. That guy's name is Marcin. How was your rest of monday? Seems like you're not a lazy person.
4:40 (next day) - her: You know, I was so tired, I was sleeping once you replied. I'm from small city, co I have to get used to yours city fuss.
4:42 - her: Besides I have to be in work at 6 am. Damnn :(
6:47 - me: Heh, I'm just right off my car and I'm also starting my work. I won't lie, in my city a lot of stuff happen. People on Internet may laugh, but I like my city.
14:45 - her: I'm just right after work, I'm exhausted.. I'm dreaming only of sleeping
18:03 - me: How it was? My day was calm, I was a butterball [I meant laziness]

No reply since then.

[convo with girl from 2), texted likke 4 hours after approach]
19:07- me: Hola! I didn't think I'll meet a future nurse anytime. I already know, who I'll come to in case of check up!
8:55 (next day) - her: Hi ;) Better watch yourself, so you won't have to see me to check up :D
12:29 - me: So I'll watch after myself ;) Good weather, yearly student carnival in evening, nothing, but live!
13:51 - her: Yeaa, it's going to be a great evening
14:53 - me: What are your plans?
14:54 - her: I'm just going home right now :D I have to do some shopping with brother and in evening I'm going to my friend's birthday :v And you?
15:05 - me: I'll play pool with my buddy, then meet with my friends at dormitory and later off to the city center. Today good techno music will be playing ;)

Aaand that's the end! What's interesting is the fact they stop replying once it seems like we're slowly having a normal conversation. In those moments I'm thinking "Ok, now we're in the mood, set up the date!", but then girls start to ignore my messages.