Sadly, your revision is actually more correct. Women are innately Machiavellian, rude, entitled, and ungrateful.

http://www.reddit.com/r/TheRedPill/comments/3ary9r/askreddit_thread_reveals_that_women_hate_men/csfv6oc

Most women are shitty manipulative brats. ... Not just in my experiences, but in the experiences of roughly 110,000 men, women are shit.

http://www.reddit.com/r/PurplePillDebate/comments/38m149/what_do_trpillers_actually_like_in_women/crx1cyb

Aerobus agrees women are "naturally self-absorbed, Machiavellian, incapable of honor and loyalty, incapable of empathy, irrational etc." And also that most women lack any positive traits.

http://www.reddit.com/r/PurplePillDebate/comments/38m149/what_do_trpillers_actually_like_in_women/crw1ph7

No, of course I'm not being completely serious, but the fact is that this is not totally ridiculous which just shows to go how powerful the male sex drive is and how vapid and uninteresting women are.

http://www.reddit.com/r/PurplePillDebate/comments/38m149/what_do_trpillers_actually_like_in_women/crwxf0v

Most women are useless. They are physically inferior, intellectually inferior, and generally stupid. Other than birthing children, they really have no use for the human species.

http://www.reddit.com/r/PurplePillDebate/comments/38m149/what_do_trpillers_actually_like_in_women/crwrma6

Do the red pill ladies here agree that as a woman you're Machiavellian, rude, entitled, ungrateful, a shitty manipulative brat, self-absorbed, incapable of honor and loyalty, incapable of empathy, irrational, lacking positive traits, vapid, uninteresting, mostly useless besides for reproduction, physically inferior, intellectually inferior and generally stupid? Are these accurate beliefs about women and you as a woman that you approve of?