How to phrase shit

heckz · 2011-07-26T05:02:09+00:00

it's just like job interviews, talk about specific examples not general abstract concepts.

Delightful_White · 2011-07-26T05:15:44+00:00

it has nothing to do with what you enjoy doing. It's all about the passion you have about doing it.

Which is better?:

"I like camping"

or...

"I love the outdoors more than anything. It gives me such an amazing feeling that can't be matched. This one time while I was camping with my friends we had this incredible adventure where [blah blah blah DHV story]."

You get the idea?

boyfrienddestroyers · 2011-07-26T06:44:27+00:00

show don't tell bro

ArdentDrive · 2011-07-26T15:10:29+00:00

Great point. Another example:

"I'm a computer science major"

isn't nearly as interesting as -

"I knew I wanted to be a programmer since seventh grade, when we had to get these graphing calculators for class and I buried myself in its manual and made my first video game on it, which pretty soon the whole school was playing."

Title	How to phrase shit
Author	testmypatience
Upvotes	14
Comments	17
Date	July 26, 2011 4:14 AM UTC (15 years ago)
Subreddit	Posted in /r/seduction
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